Sian this is an excellent first essay. You have really tackled the idea of how your skills have progressed and this will be so vital in the remaining 4 essays to write. Your chosen theories have been applied perfectly; you confidently analyse their relevance in relation to your work. Targets: * Tighten things up in relation to the actual question you are answering - you will only have about 20 mins to answer this question so everything you say must be relevant (in this case relevant to Creativity) - at times I feel you stray a little. Level 4 - 22/25
Sian this is an excellent first essay. You have really tackled the idea of how your skills have progressed and this will be so vital in the remaining 4 essays to write. Your chosen theories have been applied perfectly; you confidently analyse their relevance in relation to your work.
ReplyDeleteTargets:
* Tighten things up in relation to the actual question you are answering - you will only have about 20 mins to answer this question so everything you say must be relevant (in this case relevant to Creativity) - at times I feel you stray a little.
Level 4 - 22/25